In the first project I had utilized the whole picture plane, and I also show repetition through out my lines. I could have made more bold lines and make some of my lines more smooth because they look a bit wavy. I believe I did capture the goal of the project but there is always room for improvement. As you can see its hard to see the vocal point which is the little line dots, so next time I will make the vocal point much bolder or at least more visible to the eye. I do believe I could have through in more shapes and variation in my piece.
misterju1996 